Audience Feedback

Due to some of our material in our trailer being classified as adult content we have to create awareness of what parts these are.
1) Although there is no nudity in our trailer, it does insinuate the idea of nudity and sex. This automatically is something we have to take great care in and make sure that we choose a suitable certification for our film.
2) The use of train stations have to be accounted for as there is a danger while filming with them as there is a risk of danger if people are not aware of their surroundings while they are filming.

After showing our first draft, we received some audience feedback including things people liked, disliked and their overall impressions of the trailer. 75% of our responses said that they were impressed by our opening, with the remaining 25% finding it average. Our genre is clear as everyone knew the trailer was Social Realism, and the responses that we intended for where given, with emotional responses like "really intrigued and sad" and "i'm holding back tears".

Due to the constructive criticism received from our first viewing we have decided to take out the itching shots as we believe it isn't needed to show the protagonist's decline. To link the beginning to the rest of the trailer we have inserted a black screen with message alerts playing as this emphasises our theme of the dangers of technology. Our font was not ready for the first viewing but has now been changed also. 

We also discovered that our music in the second half of the trailer was copyright free, so had to find another peice of music for the second half of the trailer. We actually preferred this music, and found it very effective as it was slightly contrapuntal. 

Here is the trailer we showed:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vlk-brdbdy8

Here is the trailer after our adaptions were made:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utZBBzN7YHk